feedback on magazine

In the video i was given a lot of useful feedback. Most of the people were impressed with the girl being on the contents page, they believed that it attracted people to buy the magazine. One boy said that i should put the girl on the front cover as this will appeal to the male readers more and put the boy on the contents, if i had enough time i would have done this but I do not have enough time, but i have taken his points into consideration. Another boy said they felt that the images of Asher dominated the main feature page too much, and I should increase the size of the text and decrease the sizes of the images, I intend to do these changes.